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Flugigo
11-20-2004, 02:24 PM
Title: Porn and I
Author: YuYu
Subject: Porn
Porn, oh porn
How I love thee.
Thy makes me wack
And thy makes me le(ap).
Big ass tits
Nice tight clits.
Right on the dick
Left on a chip.
Porn
How I love thee.
Mmkay.



Title: My Reason
Author: Anthony/Mssj.Vegeta
Subject: A Loved One

Please forgive me, I know not
what I did, I’m so sorry
I wasn’t able to see this.
How could I have known?
How could you have understood?
We both have our reasons,
and all they do is stay silent.

But yet in our eyes, there’s
a love so great, greater than
than the entire world could take.
I had never believed in love, I only
thought of hate. But baby, you’re
the reason I’ve changed. I used
to live a life of loneliness, hiding
in the shadows and darkness. For
the first time I came out in the light
and felt the warmth of everything in
sight because you gave me a reason to
live, you’re the reason I survived.


I don’t know if you’ll forgive me, you
were hurt too. But I’m trying to get
close to you to show you I need you
more than the world does. I’m sorry I
ignored you it was the wrong thing
to do. But every time we get close
something or someone always comes
between us two. Back then I thought
we were never meant for each other.
But now I realized I should have
tried harder. The first time I saw you
I knew I had liked you but why Would
such beauty ever like a character
like me. Maybe you’ll understand
maybe you won’t but at least hear me
out.

Now that’s in the past I still
can’t believe everything went
by so fast. That’s the thing about
love, if you don’t feel it once
you might never feel it again.
You’re my present, you’re my
future. You’re the only one I
would fight for, you’re the only
one I would sacrifice for. I may
not be able to bring you the moon
and the stars but I’ll tell you their
meaning and we’ll wish upon a
star. I may not be able to say The
right words but the things I would
do for you, you’ll know actions
Speak louder than words. Even if
you reject me I’ll still watch
over you and make sure you’re
happy in everything you do.
I’m not afraid of dying, I’m only afraid of
loosing you.


Title: A Puddle of Blood
Author: Joe
Subjects: A Breakup, Puddle of Blood
I have never been one to run away from anything,
untill she stabbed me in the back,
and now I sit aboard a train,
and I plan to never return.

She had left a bloody knife in my heart,
still dripping wherever I would go,
red bloodstains would forever follow me,
and I where I could once find mud,
I now find a puddle of blood.

I got off the train and starting running,
I would get as far away from he as I could,
and I would never look back,
I would never look back again.

Eventually I fell to my feet,
I could not carry on,
there wound left in me was too terrible,
and where I fell, there will always be A Puddle of Blood.


Title: Vita
Author: Manda
Subject: Life
The fat house recalled she liked to go out, she had a job, had to go to school to sharpen her senses.
Her room would answer she was exciting, collection of articles from downtown to ‘Keep Austin Weird’.
Never having matching sheets, the bed felt that it gave her room personality that nothing looked the same.
Replied her lamp, she liked to read; Edgar Allan Poe “The Raven,” her number-one.

Driveway acknowledges that she enjoyed working on her Jetta, putting in hoses and changing the oil to keep her purring.
The green VW Jetta would tell us it has always been well kept; feminine as she was she appreciated cars more than anyone.
Her dwelling would watch her snap the rain dripping down on the deck or two men playing chess while birds fly around.
She would capture it just at the right moment when everyone admires at the beauty that nature bestowed on us.

Ducklings would quack that she would always bring bits of bread or seeds to feed them though thick and thin.
Posing for her snapshots; she brought her camera everywhere since you never know when you may need it.
Harbors and docks would always see her sitting on the edge, watching the turtles swim by or sitting on their log.
Perched, she would wave her hand around in the water, watching the sun reflect of the gills of the fish that swam by.

Sitting in the enormous lusciously green backyard she had many friends whom sat around listening to music just talking.
The torches would often crackle with orange burning flames whispering; often getting together with close friends.
The delicate sand would blow gracefully around her beautiful sand patterns, communicating about her gentleness.
The boulders would illustrate her engaging environment in their shiny black reflection.


Title: Gone
Author: blueri
Subject: Death
Away it slips,
like the wind through the trees,
my hope, replaced by sadness,
my last whisp of courage,
gone.

taken,
by the empire without glory,
the man, without a head,
with one swift grasp,
gone

poisoned,
by the "heros" he will never know
reduced to nothing,
and further below,
he walked straight into the white wall of death
alone, unaided,
gone.


Title: Scars of Sin
Author: Vexxotic
Subject: Death/Life
Together, face to face we stand
Me without kin and you without band
To the death we must fight
In minutes, one will see the light
Destroy your flesh and sever your soul
But what of the sin, I gladly pay the toll
Both children of God, why must we kill?
Of blood, sweat, and tear, all we shall spill
Brothers we were, enemies we are
Once I kill you, I'll live with the scar......
The scar of sin


Title: Black Goodbye
Author: Haroken
Category: Torture
Deeds are done,
Wars are won.
Behind the scenes,
The in between,
Time for black goodbyes.

Hold it within,
The lights are dim.
Feel it burn,
One must learn,
Time for black goodbyes.

You bring the pain,
My eyes, pouring rain.
Single spill,
As one will,
Time for black goodbyes.

The key is there,
Wallow in despair.
Taken from me,
You feel no need,
Time for black goodbyes.

Time for my black goodbye.


Title: Love With Two Tongues
Author: Invader (Johnny Garcia)
Subject: A Loved One
I take time to look at the real world,
Its hell for saviors,
and heavon for fools.
A world were most everything outshines morality..
A Place to uncover the depression,
and to be proud to show the wounds.
You Spoke of love with two tongues...
Upon the burdend thrown,
Love, an excuse without content.
When we can no longer cry,
and the void is torn..
then its easy to forget,
Who threw our wings into the scorching sun.
Its hard to be happy with a smile that doesnt fit..
A Blackened Melancholic Jester Masque.
A sad medly it was,
That brought an unspeakable pain to my reality...
Where empty windows wave goodbye,
and a week seems sometimes shorter
than a half nights longing.
Who knows the certain reasons,
why it all begins and ends.
A glance to the eyes wont tell...
The hurt im waiting to feel..
Tears a hole with the knife
Im still longing to use...


Title: Locked Up
Author: Ryko
Subject: A Loved One/Torture
Yo yo yo my sons birthday is today
I got him a new playstation 2
I got drink and stupid
Got my car
and went to the bar
When I left the cops were chasing me
Next thing I remeber is waking up in a cell
They said My court date ain't till tuesday
They said I was doing 190 on the freeway
With 4 bags of crack and 3 cases of Bud
They pulled me out of my car and started beatin' me up
They told my kid to look at me and laugh
I was bloody, and bruised
They don't even let me get a bath

I can't take this, I'm going crazy cause I'm all locked up
I don't know how to deal with this
I'm all locked up
They won't even let me see my kids
I'm all locked up

They got me in 7 day lock-down
I can't even move in this cell
They took my rights away
They took my money away
I have pay $5 a day
Just to stay in this hell

I can't take this
I'm going crazy just thinking how i ruined my kids birthday

When I went to court my bail was raised
My bails now at elven thou.

I can't take this, I'm going crazy cause I'm all locked up
I don't know how to deal wiith this
I'm all locked
They won't even let me see my kids
I'm all locked up

Joey
11-20-2004, 02:27 PM
In the end it came down to a child's laughter, and an idiot's soul. But Invader's got my vote over Yuyu's.

YuYu
11-20-2004, 02:29 PM
Damn. :(

I voted Vexx. I liked his the best.

Ryko
11-20-2004, 07:53 PM
Yu Yu's. It was funny as hell.

Invader
11-20-2004, 10:00 PM
i voted for Vexxotox, I liked his.

I dont like YuYu's poem (No Offense), his was a joke. Some people put their hearts into poems, while people like yuyu waste about 10 mins in theirs...and win, sorry...im just in a bad mood i guess.:mellow:

YuYu
11-20-2004, 10:05 PM
I dont like YuYu's poem (No Offense), his was a joke. Some people put their hearts into poems, while people like yuyu waste about 10 mins in theirs...and win, sorry...im just in a bad mood i guess.:mellow: Well its not like someone has to have problems to actually write one of these poems. And I can't see anyone besides you pouring out your heart into poems on a Anime forum. Those two just don't click for me. And I was the only person that seemed to have "wasted" 10 (even though it took my 5 but w/e) minutes on this. And if I win, then yay me, but its just a contest, get over it.

Rykon
11-20-2004, 10:08 PM
I voted for YuYu's. Its funny, not emo goth, and doesnt suck. And plus he doesnt suck like the rest of you.

Invader
11-20-2004, 10:09 PM
Ok, sorry. i guess i was just being a sore loser. >>

Edit: Wait..are Ryko and Rykon the same people?
Edit2: Call it emo/goth, but i think thats what peoms are made of..Not tits and clits..
Edit3: I hope none of this affects anyones voting.

YuYu
11-20-2004, 10:11 PM
No

ghey10chactersz

Shuriken
11-20-2004, 10:54 PM
Why did you guys let Ryko enter? His is just a cheap copy of the real song, " I'm locked up" or whatever it's called.

YuYu
11-20-2004, 11:03 PM
Edit2: Call it emo/goth, but i think thats what peoms are made of..Not tits and clits..
Don't hate. :cool:

Ryko
11-20-2004, 11:46 PM
Mine is a cheap copy? Fuck you. I did that poem cause I was depressed BITCH!

Invader
11-21-2004, 11:45 AM
Don't hate. :cool:...........Ok :wub:

Manda
11-21-2004, 01:07 PM
Stop your potty mouth I don't want to stuff a bar of soap down your throat! You might think tha'ts kinky, BUT IT'S NOT! :mad: ^_^ Haroken gets my vote, it was awesome hehe.

Haroken
11-21-2004, 02:24 PM
Thanks manda!


I gave my vote to Blueri because I liked it (duh) and it was very smooth.

Vexxotic
11-21-2004, 09:36 PM
It came down to YuYu and Haroken. I thought both were really good, but Haroken got my vote.

blueri
11-21-2004, 09:39 PM
i voted for vexx - love the word flow...

YuYu
11-21-2004, 09:40 PM
The thought of people actually considering voting me in this really scares me XD

deftone
11-21-2004, 10:23 PM
blueri GMV.

Invader
11-21-2004, 10:49 PM
The thought of people actually considering voting me in this really scares me XDI think your gunna win, thats more scary...

Haroken
11-21-2004, 10:52 PM
Indeed. QUite scary.

Thanks fo rthe vote Vex.

Invader
11-21-2004, 10:57 PM
"...will be plugged in the main page of DBZSC.com for recognition (With a link to the winning poem). "
Can you imagine that poem on the main page of DBZSC.com...what would people think?

YuYu
11-22-2004, 04:15 PM
They would think that I rule, duh.

Haroken
11-22-2004, 05:22 PM
Oh well Yuyu will win so good job man.

Flugigo
11-22-2004, 09:05 PM
Oh well Yuyu will win so good job man.


o_O; Eh... yeah, no.

The ninth edition of the "Best Poetry in the Forums" contest will be held on Friday, November 19th, 2004, and will end on Friday, November 26th, 2004.

*shwing*

Haroken
11-22-2004, 09:06 PM
THats only 4 days. I doubt anyof us will get 3-4 votes in that time withoiut Yube getting more as well.

Flugigo
11-22-2004, 09:07 PM
It's not over till a fat lady sings. I'm not a fat lady, and I can't sing either.

Regardless, just wait it out.

Haroken
11-23-2004, 03:53 PM
Holy crap Vexx gained some votes.

YuYu
11-23-2004, 04:01 PM
XD

If I just did the GokuBlade way, then I would be winning by one instead of tieing with the person I voted for.

Vexxotic
11-23-2004, 05:08 PM
What the furk? Where'd all those votes come from?


If I just did the GokuBlade way, then I would be winning by one instead of tieing with the person I voted for.
Score 1 for YuYu

Gohi
11-23-2004, 09:00 PM
I voted Yu Yu since his actually gave me some emotion. Though, that emotion was humor.

Haroken
11-23-2004, 09:11 PM
I'll laugh when this poem is linked on the home site. :D

Flugigo
11-24-2004, 11:59 PM
I'll laugh when this poem is linked on the home site. :D

I'd simply post a disclaimer warning that it is a mature poem. I won't post the actual poem on the home page. I've had the idea not to do that since before entries were received. Two reasons: the porn subject, and length.

Regardless, this is still on guys. Vexxotic only needs two votes to tie YuYu for the lead.

Rykon
11-25-2004, 09:34 PM
Now three. Which I doubt he'll get. Pretty much every member who's still active herre has voted.

Flugigo
11-26-2004, 05:19 PM
Looks like Yu will win. We have to wait it out for the final 4 hours though. At that time, I'll make the final post n' such.