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Joey
06-15-2004, 02:26 PM
Ecko
Shy
I don't know what to do anymore
She just seems to far away
I still try to get closer
But I keep pushing myself away
I knew I should have jumped for it
When I had the chance
She would have gave me an answer that
Ended in a "Yes"
But everyday I saw her
I couldn't grab that courage
To walk right up and ask
Something without wordage
It has now ended
Thus she's with a another guy
I wonder what could have been
I guess I was just to shy

Joe
A Teardrop
A teardrop rolls down his cheek,
rain pours into a puddle,
calm water splashes it's way down the stream,
the river rages along it's path,
and the ocean's exploding,
not looking back.
The water so warm,
it's like a volcano busting without regret,
and his anger is bursting as he tries to hold back,
but he can't.

Geo
Cold Morning
On my way to all my dreams
I can see all the bright lights
I can taste the fame upon the air
The fear and the dreams.
On my way to happiness
An overdraft abroad
Leave the world without a care
The fear and the ambition.
One way ticket to acknowledgement
Ticket with no return
Become a superstar of the underworld
Follow me to fame.
No return from the 59
Bus driver take me home
To the tall can fires and the dirty streets
Where everyone knows my name.

Mondracon
Dream Catcher
I fly right up into the face of the sky
pass through its nostrils
shoot through the stars
past crumbling planets
With wings made of paper and brass rings
shadow inside, fire outside
mating together
into ash and soot
I carry a web of glass and iron
and a heavy silk-bound book
that writes itself
in embroidered sigils
weaves spider pathways
across the mouth of the cosmos
shutting up the patter of feet
stilling the rotations of galaxies
silencing the universe
So that words can be dropped
like silver coins
pearl earrings
squirming ants
Into the still cold waters
of Wishing.

jebo32
A priests Epiphany
I led a long life of regret,
Following that "Book of Death".
I first read it in that motel room,
After my girl left me to live in a pit of doom.

Waiting, waiting, forever waiting,
For my prayers to come true.
Waiting, waiting, forever waiting,
To have what withdrew.

As I read it page by page,
I felt as if I was freed from a cage.
The Prodigal son promised my prayers would come true,
So I prayed to gain back the girl that said adieu.

Waiting, waiting, forever waiting,
For my prayers to come true.
Waiting, waiting, forever waiting,
To have what withdrew.

As I laid alone on my deathbed,
Alone, malnourished and underfed.
I realized why I felt such grief,
It was all because I followed those illogical beliefs.

Haroken
Eternity
Cold, rumbling stone
Echoes among the clouds
Peering throug endless eternity
I can only leave myself

Soaring high and into freedom
Feelings long since forgotten,
Now return gracefully.

As I saw love in the rise
Now is nothing but hate
As I spiral downwards.

Cold, Rumbling Stone
Peering through existence
Feeling lost, now gone.
...I have returned.

Zantetsuken
Pulse

For Misty,

Do you feel my heartbeat?
Blood gushes through my body,
it beats for you and only you.

I feel your touch,
excitment warms my fingertips as they glide down your sensuous skin,
my lips pucker and moisten as they draw closer to yours,
muscles tighten as you pull me close,
my mind flutters as your hips heave against mine,
eyes like the October moon penetrate my very essence,
they close slowly into the night.

Am I dead or am I alive? Or is this happiness?
My heart beats to the rythm of your voice,
saying yes, yes, yes.


OMG, way too many good poems this month, I'll lose for sure. Anyways, vote for your favorate.

Ecko
06-15-2004, 02:59 PM
Zanty has got this down.

Haroken
06-15-2004, 03:03 PM
Mon's is awesome, She GMV

Joey
06-15-2004, 03:07 PM
Geo GMV, I just really liked his poem.

Manda
06-15-2004, 03:34 PM
Mon GMV, I just love the way it flows!

Mondracon
06-15-2004, 03:53 PM
Haroken, nice use of off & partial ryhmes, different and not cliched.

jebo32
06-15-2004, 04:16 PM
I didnt like any of them. null vote.

edit:My vote is really for Joes poem.

Joey
06-15-2004, 05:14 PM
Originally posted by jebo32@Jun 15 2004, 02:16 PM
I didnt like any of them. null vote.
I thought you liked mine..

jebo32
06-15-2004, 05:52 PM
Oh damn, I did like yours. Sorry, I must of missed it when I read them all over.

Joe, really has one point not zero.

Techno Goku
06-15-2004, 07:35 PM
Ecko GMV. It reminded me so much of what I should have done last week, and so I had to vote for it. Hopefully I'll get a chance next week.

Joey
06-15-2004, 09:33 PM
It was really good. It was my second favorate.

YuYu
06-15-2004, 11:06 PM
Ecko GMV

Something exactly like that just happened to me after I broke up with my girfriend. :(

Joey
06-16-2004, 08:17 PM
We need more vote than this people.....

Flugigo
06-16-2004, 08:20 PM
I liked Ecko's. What can I say, was written very well. Great job.

Zantetsuken
06-17-2004, 07:55 PM
Jebo GMV, outstanding.

Joey
06-18-2004, 02:57 PM
Congrats to ecko, who wins.