FA: Poems.

[Sudokian]

Lets write poems!!!

ill start with one.

I hear your voice,
Your my only choice.
You enter my heart,
Giving me a special piece of art.
When I look at you,
I never feel blue.
Just once kissed,
I never feel missed.

[Flugigo]

That was nice. Do you write them for a living? You should!

[Vegita 2.0]

sinces we are doing porms i got one

::the dark consumes my heart::
::there nothing left inside::
::except the last breath::
::that keep's me alive::
::i cant find my way::
::thru this unforgiven life::
::there's only one way::
::one way to survive::
:: to give my life up::
::and look inside::
::for the pain and anger that took me inside::
:: all the pain will go awey::
:: after i take one last step::
::this is it the end of my life::
::to all my friend's who love me goodbye::

tell me if this makes you cry iwant to know for your steak ad mine

[Erin B.]

Yours is pretty. Here's a poem I wrote a while back in a poetry class I attended:

Ode to a Wolf

Listen to the cry of the mighty wolf
He is the warrior of the night
He hunts either alone or in the company of his brothers
Other creatures run in terror
He is the deadliest of all rulers
The forest is his kingdom
He has a lust for blood and death.

Fur soft yet dangerous
Claws as sharp as knives
Teeth that break through the strongest bones
He has the howl of a siren
He can sense his victims' fear.

Beware of the wolf
Run if you value your life
Don't let him catch you
You may not live to see another day.

Why are you here, mighty hunter?
Who sent you?
What is your mission on this earth?
What makes the killing machine that you are?
You are a creature of habit
You know when to strike.

May the wolf reign forever
May his skill be a sight to behold
May his children carry on his legacy
He is both a mighty hunter
And a nurturing parent.

Sing your son, majestic wolf
Rule your kingdom
Live your warrior life
Dazzle us and astound us
Teach us about your world
Share your story with mankind.

P.S. This is a poem about wolves in general, an ode actually, as the title suggests.

[Sudokian]

I like yours Erin B.

[Naemi]

If you tried my life....

If you tried my life
just for one day
your world would crash
and your life would crimple
you would fear the dark
but stay out of the light
your life would be torn
from bottom to top
if you tried my life....

Take a look around
for you all is new
no place to run
no place to hide
you should try
just for one day
too see the real world
trough the eyes of a lost one
if you tried my life....

No place with comfort
no place with peace
all is chaos
even if they speak
you do not understand
what it means to be warm
within the circle of trust
is nowhere to be found
but if you look close
you may find warmth
everything is possible
if you tried my life....

Okay that was kinda lame but it was my first ;)

Note: Im moving this to Fan Creations

[Geo]

I write songs for my Nu-Metal band, but i could have a shot at a poem.


Im ignored by the state of the nation,
As minor problems, hunger, pain emerge.
I watch day by day as crime takes over,
And families fall to dark support.
If i could change one thing about my nation,
It would be to watch closer at one problem,
Becuase if you try to tackle the big fish,
The little ones knaw you away.

There actually some of the lyrics from one of my songs, just changed and swapped abit.

[UltamateGohan89]

you can all read mine under my sig its always there