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Naemi
04-28-2003, 04:04 PM
Yo!
This is my first fanfic so i thought ill give it a shot since im kinda bored right now... Anyways.
What would happen if the Z - Squad got on a Chat ? Would That be Chaos ? Or would it be a better way of them to warn of independing danger ? Find out in DragonBall - CHAT! B)
Warnings before reading:
This is my first fanfic so dont flame me!
The "Story" contains a low amount of black humor
If you dont like the story dont read the rest
Im not very familiar with Chat so i dont know the rules or anything...
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Character presentation:
(Every time a new Character is introduced he/she/it will be added to the list)
The_Amazing_monkey ----------------------------------- Goku
Miss_Adorable --------------------------------------------- Bulma
Android_lover ---------------------------------------------- Krillin
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual ------------- Vegeta
Miss_Raven ------------------------------------------------- ChiChi
Looking_For_A_Wife -------------------------------------- Hercule / Mr. Satan
Taste_My_Fist ---------------------------------------------- Videl
Geek4Ya ----------------------------------------------------- Gohan
I_Wish_I_Was_The_Future_Me ------------------------ Trunks
Im_A_Lover_Boy ------------------------------------------ Goten
M4st3r_0F_Fusi0n ---------------------------------------- Gotenks
Small_Guys_turns_Me_On ------------------------------ Android 18
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*The_Amazing_monkey logged on 8:00 pm*
The_Amazing_monkey: Yo Whatz Up every1 ?
*TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual logged on 8:01 pm*
The_Amazing_monkey: Vegeta !?
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: Kakkarot !? Is that you !?
*Android_lover logged on 8:01 pm*
Android_lover: Yo Whats up ever1 howz it going ?
The_Amazing_monkey: Yeah Vegeta this is me what are you doing here ?
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: I dont get this! First kakkarot now Chrome Dome !?
Android_lover: Hey! Stop calling me that!
*Geek4Ya logged on 8:04 pm*
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: Phew.. finally someone that i do not know.
Geek4Ya: What do you mean Vegeta ? its me Gohan! What are you doing here ?
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: BLAST! How come everyone know who i am !? And what are you doing here ?!
Android_lover: ...
Geek4Ya: Im supposed to meet Videl here.. Has she been on ?
The_Amazing_monkey: No not that i know of...
Geek4Ya: Dad ?!
The_Amazing_monkey: Yeah what ? You didnt think i knew how to control a computer ?l
Geek4Ya: But it took me a week to learn you how to start the computer and open the internet O_o
The_Amazing_monkey: Oh well.. Chichi helped me!
*Miss_Raven logged on 8:07 pm*
Miss_Raven: Hi Gohan.
Geek4Ya: Mom !?
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: Great! Just Great! Things cant possible get worse now!
*Miss_Adorable logged in 8:10 pm*
Miss_Adorable: Hey! How are you all ?
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: ...
Miss_Adorable: Vegeta !?
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: Thats it.. im going somewere else!
*TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual logged off 8:12 pm*
The_Amazing_monkey: Im gonna use Instant Transmission to see if he is okay.. see ya'll!
Miss_Raven: You better be home at dinner! And NO SPARRING WITH HIM!
Miss_Raven: Do you hear me !?!?!?!
Miss_Raven: GOKU !?!
Miss_Raven: I Swear if that man isnt home by dinner ill crush him!
*Miss_Raven was kicked for spamming*
The_Amazing_monkey: Finally.. cya everyone!
* The_Amazing_Monkey logged off 8:15 pm*
(And this is the point were i do not want to type that everyone is logging off)
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So what did you all think of the first chapter ? It was mostly a introduction... Let me hear :)
Erin B.
04-28-2003, 04:15 PM
I like it so far. Keep it up, Naemi, I want to see more! It was awesome to see the various DBZ characters using a chat room, and original too. I was thinking of writing a Gohan/Videl fic called "You've Got Mail," and it sort of involves some chat room interaction as well (*wishes she could write it now*).
I'd write it now, but it wouldn't be fair to those awaiting Episode 10 of DBNG!
Writer of DBNG, that's me!
Naemi
04-28-2003, 04:32 PM
Thanks for the comment Erin, im glad you liked it :)
I was a little unsure if to make it or not in case nobody did ;)
Naemi
04-28-2003, 05:22 PM
Episode 2: A bad day to be online
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*The_Amazing_monkey logged on 6:04 am*
The_Amazing_monkey: Hey anyone in here ?
*Miss_Raven logged on 6:07*
Miss_Raven: Hi Goku
The_Amazing_monkey: Oh hi Chichi!
Miss_Raven: Goku why are we chatting here when we are sitting two rooms away from each other ?
The_Amazing_monkey: Caus this is more fun for the people who is reading it...
Miss_Raven: oh...
*Im_A_Lover_Boy logged on 6:11 am*
Im_A_Lover_Boy: Hey!
Miss_Raven: Hi! Why are you up this early ?
Im_A_Lover_Boy: Because if im on this early in the morning my mom wont know.. She is always so mean!
Miss_Raven: Oh.. And whats your mothers name ?
The_Amazing_monkey: Honey! Dont ask such questions to him!
Im_A_Lover_Boy: My moms name is Chichi.. why ?
Miss_Raven: GOTEN !?!?!
Im_A_Lover_Boy: Oh Sh*t O_0
*Im_A_Lover_Boy logged off 6:15 am*
*Miss_Raven logged off 6:15 am*
The_Amazing_monkey: WHAIT! Chichi! Dont be to rough on him!
*TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual logged on 6:34 am*
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: Anyone here ?
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: I Demand to speak with someone!
*I_Wish_I_Was_The_Future_Me logged on 6:35 am*
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: You there! Identify yourself!
I_Wish_I_Was_The_Future_Me: Wow dad chill it.. its me Trunks
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: Trunks ?! What are you doing here this early ?!
I_Wish_I_Was_The_Future_Me: Goten and i were supposed to meet eachother here... Have you seen him ?
The_Amazing_monkey: I dont think you are gonna see him today Trunks.
I_Wish_I_Was_The_Future_Me: Hi Goku! Why not ?
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: i bet he got in trouble with that Black Minx of yours kakkarot.
The_Amazing_monkey: Hey! Dont call her that. Thats not very nice.
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: Oh for Kami's sake kakkarot.. Shut up!
*Android_lover logged on 7:01 am*
*Small_Guys_turns_Me_On logged on 7:02 am*
Android_lover: Oh 18.. i wonna *CENCORED* with you!
Small_Guys_turns_Me_On: Oh Krillin i would like to *CENCORED* with a hat on *CENCORED* on you!
Android_lover: Oh Yeah.. I would like to *CENCORED* Together with you and Bulma!
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: WHAT !?!?!?!
Android_lover: Oh F*uck...
Small_Guys_turns_Me_On: Krillin !! I Thought you said nobody was online this time a day!
The_Amazing_monkey: wow Krillin.. i never thought you would say such things O_O
Android_lover: Dude.. This is Not Mando cool!
*Android Lover logged off 7:11 am*
*Small_Guys_turns_Me_On logged off 7:11 am*
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: i swear im gonna Kill that PRICK!
*TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual logged off 7:12 am*
*The_Amazing_monkey logged off 7:12 am*
*I_Wish_I_Was_The_Future_Me logged off 7:13 am*
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So.. That was the 2 chapter :)
What did you think ? Was it too bad or really good ? :unsure:
ROFL You might wanna move to the insane discussion though.
I liked it, but can I help with an episode or two. I got some cool ideas.
rubetheboob
04-28-2003, 08:02 PM
Oh my gosh. That was pretty funny lol. :D
Vegeta Jr.
04-28-2003, 09:16 PM
Its awsome! One suggestion...Don't give them all those screen names! I have to look back at the list every time someone new logs on!
But, very original Idea! One of my favorite fan-fics yet! keep the good work up!
Naemi
04-29-2003, 07:11 AM
Thanks for the compliments, and no, im not gonna change the thing about the screen names.. Thats part of the fun, and you are gonna get used to them later on :)
Chaos88
04-29-2003, 08:38 AM
so far its really hilarius to me
Naemi
04-29-2003, 10:39 AM
Episode 3: Operation.. Failure
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*Android_lover logged on 11:25 pm*
*The_Amazing_monkey logged on 11:25 pm*
*TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual logged on 11:26 pm*
The_Amazing_monkey: Alright Krillin go trough the plan!
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: Hey! Why does Baldy has to go trough the plan !? Im the SuperSaiyan, i should do it!
Android_lover: Because, you braindead monkey, im the only one that knows it!
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: Oh... But you do know im gonna kill you for that monkey comment right ?
Android_lover: later Vegeta.. Later
The_Amazing_monkey: So.. tell us the plan!
Android_lover: Well.. You and Vegeta goes to Dende's place to pick up the DragonBalls.
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: SSH! Dont call me the "V" word in here! Someone may be listening! We should all have secret code names!
The_Amazing_monkey: ...
Android_lover: No Vegeta... we shoudnt. Now if you would just let me finish
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: bah... i just know this is gonna be failure!
Android_lover: Whatever. As i said, you and Goku goes to kami's Lookout, to get the Blackstar DragonBalls.
The_Amazing_monkey: Wait a minute! I thought we were just gonna use the normal DragonBalls! if we use the BlackStar's, the Earth will be destroyed within a year!
Android_lover: hmm.. Well you could just Instant Transmit us to Namek, so we could use it there, right ? Then Earth wont be destroyed!
The_Amazing_monkey: Yeah!
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: *CoughBakaCough*
*Miss_Adorable logged on 11:37 pm*
Android_lover: So.. when you got the BlackStar DragonBalls, we use Instant Transmission to go to Namek, and make our wish there. From there we get 1 wish each. So what do you want ? I would like to get higher...
Miss_Adorable: What !? You are gonna do no such thing! Who else is in here ?! Vegeta !? Dont you know that the planet will explode ?! VEGETA !?
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: I had Nothing to do with it i swear! I tried to talk them out of it, i really did! Please dont do what i think you are gonna do!
Miss_Adorable: Vegeta, you are sleeping on the couch!!!! And...
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: NO! DONT!
Miss_Adorable: there is gonna be no playing "Doctor & Nurse" the next 3 months!
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: NOOOOO!
Miss_Adorable: Im gonna call Chichi and 18 right away... This is not gonna be un-punished!
The_Amazing_monkey: Hey! How did you know i was here !?
Miss_Adorable: Ha! Got you!
The_Amazing_monkey: bugga...
*The_Amazing_monkey logged off 11:52 pm*
*Miss_Adorable logged off 11:52 pm*
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: Oh Baldy.. you are so gonna pay for this!
*TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual logged off 11:53 pm*
Android_lover: Not my day...
*Android_lover logged off 11:53 pm*
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So.. what do you think ? :unsure:
Chaos88
04-29-2003, 04:35 PM
lol, so whens the next one up
Naemi
04-29-2003, 04:41 PM
Heh.. i dont know :rolleyes:
Im just making them when i feel like.. maybe tomorrow (its 9.33 PM here...) :)
Chaos88
04-29-2003, 05:15 PM
ok, (wow thats a long time from me) :blink:
Vegeta Jr.
04-29-2003, 07:11 PM
good. not as long as the others. <edit>too bad!</edit>
This post has been edited by Vegeta Jr. at 6:20 pm.
I know Naemi didn't reply but I realy wanted to do this so-
Episode 4-Pure Love
*Miss_Raven logged on 3:02 pm*
Miss_Raven-Hello?
Non_DBZ_girl-Hi
Miss_Raven-You're not on a show where aliens turn into monkeys, are you?
Non_DBZ_Girl-No.....
Miss_Raven-Good. This'll be a good chat. Oh, wait..BRB
Non_DBZ_Girl-O.K.
*Geek4YA logged on 3:09 pm*
Non_DBZ_Girl-Hi
Geek4YA-Hi, a/s/l?
Non_DBZ_Girl-Age about yours probbabally, sex often, location=here.
Geek4YA-Wanna go out? I know I'm married but my wife's acting a bitch like my mother...
Miss_Raven-WHAT!?!?!!
*Geek4YA logged off 3:14 pm*
Miss_Raven-Coward!
Non_DBZ_Girl-g2g
*Non_DBZ_Girl logged off 3:15 pm*
*Bait logged on 3:17 pm*
*Looking_For_A_Wife on 3:17 pm*
Miss_Raven-Hey looking_for_a_wife.....I'm a wife, but my husband's a monkey..
Bait-WHAT?!?! CHI-CHI!?!
Miss_Raven-Goku!?! That's not your I.D.!!!
Bait-It's a new one.
Looking_For_A_wife-Goku...Chi-chi? This is Satan..... You guys are nuts... g2g!
*Looking_For_A_wife logged off 8:25 pm*
Bait-If you think I'm a monkey, then I'm gonna have to come and give you some luvin to change you mind!
Miss_Raven-YES!
*Miss_Raven logged off 8:27 pm*
*Bait logged off 8:27 pm*
Vegeta Jr.
04-29-2003, 08:25 PM
Goood...not nearly as good as niami though. Sorry!
Naemi
04-30-2003, 03:27 AM
Joe i didnt respond because you werent online.
Anyways, i would like to have this one fanfic for myself since its my first :)
Chaos88
04-30-2003, 07:24 AM
well i say naemi does a little better than that but still good
Naemi
04-30-2003, 02:30 PM
Episode 4: Twin love!
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*Small_Guys_turns_Me_On logged on 8:24*
Small_Guys_turns_Me_On: Hey anyone here ?
Small_Guys_turns_Me_On: If anyone sees this i will be back in 5 minutes...
*I_Love_My_Twin logged on 8:30*
I_Love_My_Twin: Hey anyone here ?
Small_Guys_turns_Me_On: Wow thats a pretty bizzare name you got there O_o
I_Love_My_Twin: Hey, well what can i say other than she is a HOTTIE!
Small_Guys_turns_Me_On: hehe oh well... i used to have a twin brother i was crazy about until i meet this other guy named Krillin =)
I_Love_My_Twin: Krillin.. that rings a bell. Anything special about him ? Maybe i know him..
Small_Guys_turns_Me_On: Well.. he is short, long hair, lots of humor and very strong.
I_Love_My_Twin: Oh now i remember. I knew a guy named Krillin once. He thought he was mando cool and all, until my Twin kissed him then he was all Oh my, what should i do... Pathetic little man. But he was bald, so it cant be him.
Small_Guys_turns_Me_On: WHAT!? 17 is that you !?
I_Love_My_Twin: 18 !? But how ?! This cant be! Were are you ?
* Android_lover logged on 8:54*
Android_lover: Hey everyone!
Small_Guys_turns_Me_On: Hi Krillin...
Android_lover: Yo whatz up 18 ? What are you doing ? Anyone else in here ?
Small_Guys_turns_Me_On: Not that i know of.
Android_lover: So did you hear the rumors ?
Small_Guys_turns_Me_On: What rumors ? Tell me!
Android_lover: Goku and Bulma hooked up, or so they say in town, And vegeta/Chichi doesnt know yet.
Small_Guys_turns_Me_On: What !? No way!
Android_lover: Yeah its weird.. im just glad that we are still together =)
Small_Guys_turns_Me_On: Yeah, me to..
Android_lover: Are you sure no one else is in here ?
Small_Guys_turns_Me_On: positive.. You dont think i would lie to you ?!
Android_lover: Course not! I would never believe that...
I_Love_My_Twin: Sorry i didnt respont 18 i just had to use the bathroom.. so, what do you say we go to my place and have some hot *Cencored* with each other ?!
Android_lover: WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!
Small_Guys_turns_Me_On: 17!! You idiot!
Android_lover: i cant say how disapointed i am right now 18.. i thought you loved me!
Small_Guys_turns_Me_On: Im sorry Krillin. I have to go!
* Small_Guys_turns_Me_On logged off 9:12*
I_Love_My_Twin: Oh yeeeah.. cya baldy!
*I_Love_My_Twin logged off 9:13 pm*
*Miss_Raven logged on 9:13 pm*
Miss_Raven: are they gone ?
Android_lover: Yup!
Miss_Raven: you coming ?
Android_lover: Right back at ya!
* Android_lover: logged off 9:14 pm*
*Miss_Raven logged off 9:15 pm*
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So.. was it good or bad ? :unsure:
(I know this fic is a little "Vulgar" but you just have to get used to it)
Erin B.
04-30-2003, 03:36 PM
Hey, Naemi, just read your latest installment of this fic. Let me tell you, it's coming along great. Though, I'm not too crazy about Goku and Bulma hooking up. Especially since Vegeta's fond of his wife and won't let any other man have her.
Writer of DBNG, that's me!
P.S. I just posted Episode 10 of my fic (I'm kind of bored at the moment, and I decided to go ahead with it). Give it a read and tell me what you think!
Naemi
04-30-2003, 03:53 PM
Originally posted by Erin B.@Apr 30 2003, 01:36 PM
Hey, Naemi, just read your latest installment of this fic. Let me tell you, it's coming along great. Though, I'm not too crazy about Goku and Bulma hooking up. Especially since Vegeta's fond of his wife and won't let any other man have her.
Thx for the comments.
And just to remind you.. Krillin said "Rumors in town" so it might not be true :)
Erin B.
04-30-2003, 04:10 PM
Originally posted by Naemi+Apr 30 2003, 01:53 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Naemi @ Apr 30 2003, 01:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin--Erin B.@Apr 30 2003, 01:36 PM
Hey, Naemi, just read your latest installment of this fic. Let me tell you, it's coming along great. Though, I'm not too crazy about Goku and Bulma hooking up. Especially since Vegeta's fond of his wife and won't let any other man have her.
Thx for the comments.
And just to remind you.. Krillin said "Rumors in town" so it might not be true :) [/b][/quote]
Right, gotcha!
Chaos88
04-30-2003, 07:43 PM
i really like these fan fics
Vegeta Jr.
04-30-2003, 09:42 PM
MAKE THEM LONGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(Please)!
Naemi
05-01-2003, 08:49 AM
Nah.. im gonna make them small. Otherwise its not fun for me ;)
GokuJr_GT
05-02-2003, 05:12 PM
Originally posted by Naemi@Apr 28 2003, 02:04 PM
Yo!
This is my first fanfic so i thought ill give it a shot since im kinda bored right now... Anyways.
What would happen if the Z - Squad got on a Chat ? Would That be Chaos ? Or would it be a better way of them to warn of independing danger ? Find out in DragonBall - CHAT! B)
Warnings before reading:
This is my first fanfic so dont flame me!
The "Story" contains a low amount of black humor
If you dont like the story dont read the rest
Im not very familiar with Chat so i dont know the rules or anything...
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Character presentation:
(Every time a new Character is introduced he/she/it will be added to the list)
The_Amazing_monkey ----------------------------------- Goku
Miss_Adorable --------------------------------------------- Bulma
Android_lover ---------------------------------------------- Krillin
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual ------------- Vegeta
Miss_Raven ------------------------------------------------- ChiChi
Looking_For_A_Wife -------------------------------------- Hercule / Mr. Satan
Taste_My_Fist ---------------------------------------------- Videl
Geek4Ya ----------------------------------------------------- Gohan
I_Wish_I_Was_The_Future_Me ------------------------ Trunks
Im_A_Lover_Boy ------------------------------------------ Goten
M4st3r_0F_Fusi0n ---------------------------------------- Gotenks
Small_Guys_turns_Me_On ------------------------------ Android 18
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*The_Amazing_monkey logged on 8:00 pm*
The_Amazing_monkey: Yo Whatz Up every1 ?
*TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual logged on 8:01 pm*
The_Amazing_monkey: Vegeta !?
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: Kakkarot !? Is that you !?
*Android_lover logged on 8:01 pm*
Android_lover: Yo Whats up ever1 howz it going ?
The_Amazing_monkey: Yeah Vegeta this is me what are you doing here ?
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: I dont get this! First kakkarot now Chrome Dome !?
Android_lover: Hey! Stop calling me that!
*Geek4Ya logged on 8:04 pm*
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: Phew.. finally someone that i do not know.
Geek4Ya: What do you mean Vegeta ? its me Gohan! What are you doing here ?
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: BLAST! How come everyone know who i am !? And what are you doing here ?!
Android_lover: ...
Geek4Ya: Im supposed to meet Videl here.. Has she been on ?
The_Amazing_monkey: No not that i know of...
Geek4Ya: Dad ?!
The_Amazing_monkey: Yeah what ? You didnt think i knew how to control a computer ?l
Geek4Ya: But it took me a week to learn you how to start the computer and open the internet O_o
The_Amazing_monkey: Oh well.. Chichi helped me!
*Miss_Raven logged on 8:07 pm*
Miss_Raven: Hi Gohan.
Geek4Ya: Mom !?
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: Great! Just Great! Things cant possible get worse now!
*Miss_Adorable logged in 8:10 pm*
Miss_Adorable: Hey! How are you all ?
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: ...
Miss_Adorable: Vegeta !?
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: Thats it.. im going somewere else!
*TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual logged off 8:12 pm*
The_Amazing_monkey: Im gonna use Instant Transmission to see if he is okay.. see ya'll!
Miss_Raven: You better be home at dinner! And NO SPARRING WITH HIM!
Miss_Raven: Do you hear me !?!?!?!
Miss_Raven: GOKU !?!
Miss_Raven: I Swear if that man isnt home by dinner ill crush him!
*Miss_Raven was kicked for spamming*
The_Amazing_monkey: Finally.. cya everyone!
* The_Amazing_Monkey logged off 8:15 pm*
(And this is the point were i do not want to type that everyone is logging off)
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So what did you all think of the first chapter ? It was mostly a introduction... Let me hear :)
What Black humor? I dont see any?
Vegeta Jr.
05-04-2003, 07:58 PM
im reading them....postt more!
Chaos88
05-05-2003, 08:26 AM
ya post some more
Erin B.
05-05-2003, 11:26 AM
I'm with Vegeta Jr. and LegendaryGoku on this one. POST MORE OF THIS STORY ALREADY! (oops, didn't mean to sound that harsh, I'm just a little impatient).
Naemi
05-05-2003, 11:55 AM
im sorry to disapoint you guys but im not gonna post a new chap this week. Im leaving school but not before my exam is done with :( I got to study and have the fun i can most! So im not gonna make it in a near future :unsure:
Thats fair enough, i'm as eager to read it as these lot, but there are more importat things.
STill, a lot of people are quiting Fan Fics, including me, cause noone reads mine ((not like theres a hint there or anything)), but this is, was and will remain one of the best.
Hope u come back to it in the MEDIUM future :D
Erin B.
05-05-2003, 01:21 PM
Originally posted by Geo@May 5 2003, 10:57 AM
Thats fair enough, i'm as eager to read it as these lot, but there are more importat things.
STill, a lot of people are quiting Fan Fics, including me, cause noone reads mine ((not like theres a hint there or anything)), but this is, was and will remain one of the best.
Hope u come back to it in the MEDIUM future :D
I'm still brainstorming the fifteenth episode of my fic, but other than that, I haven't quit the Fanfiction writing bit. I only take off for brainstorming my story's plot (though, I barely needed any of that for Episodes 11, 12, 13, and 14).
Geo, your story showed a lot of promise, and I hate to see you quit after all the hard work you did.
Please come back, Geo!
:o Writer of DBNG, that's me!!
007-vegita
05-09-2003, 08:41 AM
ok this is just me but i thought that one was a little weird
but steel i liked it.
:morning:
UltamateGohan89
05-10-2003, 05:06 PM
i like them so far their great i copy and print these because my computer has been unpredictable ever since i had to get a new hard drive but still i love the series can't wait the next one
Naemi
05-13-2003, 06:11 PM
Im not gonna continue this for a couple of reasons so i got 2 choices.
Close this topic
Find someone to continue if they want...
If you want to continue it just PM otherwise ill close it in the end of the week.
Flugigo
05-13-2003, 06:47 PM
Get Joe to do it. He did an earlier one, he was pretty good.
Vegeta Jr.
05-16-2003, 08:35 PM
CONTINUE THIS FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!1
Hey Naemi, dont close it, otherwise everyone at DBZ talk Radio will have to put you through some Ker-azi adventure :blink:
(Its good to be back...)
Chaos88
06-11-2003, 06:05 PM
the DBZ radio talk is back, im just wanting for someone to at least post in there
UltamateGohan89
06-11-2003, 10:50 PM
So the question is is someonegoin to take over DBZ chat or can naemi do it now that schools out
Originally posted by Flugigo@May 13 2003, 05:47 PM
Get Joe to do it. He did an earlier one, he was pretty good.
I'm real busy, as much as I'd hate this going bybye, I can't do it. Maybe in a couple of weeks, but I just got a job, my mom's sick, and internet stuff I said I'd do, I'm just so busy.
Lmao!I loved it!Please continue either Joe or Naemi when you have the time!
UltamateGohan89
06-15-2003, 01:16 PM
howabout someone besides naemi or joe do it
I'd do it.........doubt anyone would want me too though....
rubetheboob
06-15-2003, 06:25 PM
No, Because they are like the best, they are all really funny.
Hey, I think im pretty funny myself thank you very much :angry:
Chaos88
06-16-2003, 01:43 PM
I m glad im back hwere, wll it seems no one stil wntes this going
Originally posted by Geo@Jun 15 2003, 03:12 PM
I'd do it.........doubt anyone would want me too though....
Give it a shot.
Naemi
06-20-2003, 06:13 PM
Yeah go ahead if you want to :)
Yeah, why not
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Looking_For_A_Wife logged on at 8:34pm
Looking_For_A_Wife:Anyone here?
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual logged on at 8:36pm
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: Hey Hercule
Looking_For_A_Wife: Hey Vegeta
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: Isnt anyone else here?
Looking_For _A_Wife: No. Im lonely.
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: BRB
Looking_For_A_Wife left at 8:38pm
Im_A_Lover_Boy logged on at 8:39pm
Im_A_Lover_Boy: Hmmmm
Im_A_Lover_Boy changed name to Im_A_Lover
Looking_For_A_Wife logged on at 8:42pm
Looking_for_a_wife:Hey!
Im_A_Lover: Hey, asl?
Looking_For_A_Wife: Old/M/Here
Im_A_Lover: Cool.
Looking_For_A_Wife: You interested?
Im_A_Lover: WTF?
Looking_For_A_Wife: Your a girl right?
Im_A_Lover: No, Im Goten
Looking_For_A_Wife: S**t...
TheLegendarySuperSaiyanWithNoEqual: OMG
Im_A_Lover: Vegeta, he came onto me....
TheLegendarySuperSayinWithNoEqual: Im gonna tell Kakarot!
Im_A_Lover: S**t....
Looking_For_A_Wife: Oops...
TheLegendarySuperSayinWithNoEqual left at 8:45pm
Im_A_Lover: Hercule...when I get my hands on you your dead...
Looking_For_A_Wife: No date then?
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/ EDIT by MOD: Be careful with the language. This is not Insane Disscussion. //End
lol. hat was pretty good.
Tanx, but its not as good as urs in my opinion, funny, not as funny.
Chaos88
06-21-2003, 12:16 AM
well I dont really know, which is good.
Flugigo
06-21-2003, 12:26 AM
It was good, but watch it with language. Seriously, you used S**t twice. Be careful...
Ahh son of a....*thinks about this* nice person?
Eh, we all make mistakes, thats what rubbers are for...
Chaos88
06-29-2003, 04:29 PM
well im not sure about any of this any more
Vegeta Jr.
07-18-2003, 08:17 AM
Too bad. Might as well be closed... Unless Geo has a ton of free time.
On other note, I have put over 67 eps. up on my site (dbnr.freeweb.ws).
Go check it out if you have the chance.
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